Just a tip. Try to make your own footage. The video is more or less a PowerPoint presentation with images from the internet. The music at the end of the video seems too loud and sudden. Your voice is good:)

thanks I need an area to film and some video ideas before I start making my own footage 

And next time I will make sure to tone down the music at the end 

thanks for the advice greatly appreciated 

Also when is your next video coming out man I’ve been waiting